1021112英文造句批改 - 籃球

Kyle avatar
By Kyle
at 2013-11-12T00:00

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1. The deliveryman drove along aroad which was full of weeds by his GPS, but he seemed lost tensely for fiftyminutes. 2. The short engineer who did nothave a girlfriend has worked at the factory over thirteen hours, and he took abreak to brew a coffee. 3. When the perfumes in departmentstore had been sold out in annual sale, the baggage in department store wasalso sold out later. 4. Boss ‘ Philippine servant withshort hair always adds pepper to beef needles, because she is used to eatingspicily for a lot of years. 5. I am usually to like to readthe Apple Daily, contain a large number of content, and basketball magazine –XXL, which introduces a player’s strived process, in the library morning ,Sunday. 6. The wealthy merchant whomanaged a iron factory owned several super cars and, among them, Ferrari is his the most favorite,and he drove one to race at high speed on the road of greater measure of areaat midnight. 7. Balloon is attractable for kidsto hope to buy them by their parents and cotton candy is delicious for kids toask to eat in amusement park, too. 8. The policy of wrecking civic house ofgovernment angered people to sit in still to protest on the square of being infront of the city government. 9. He who has been married to hiswife than ten years turned greatly angry, after husband saw that his wife wasbarely sleeping with another man whom he didn’t recognize. 10. Dragons, which looked like mixture of snakes and bulls, was considerthem to not exist in the world but various people believe them have mysteriouspower vigor.
1. 那個送貨員靠GPS充滿樹木的馬路走,他似乎緊張地迷路了15分鐘。2. 那個矮矮的沒有女友的工程師已經在工廠工作超過13個小時,然後他歇回兒去泡咖啡。3. 當百貨公司的香水已經在周年慶賣完了,百貨公司的行李箱也賣完了。4. 老闆的短頭髮菲律賓女傭吃牛肉麵加辣椒,習慣吃辣好多年了。5. 我常常喜歡在周日早晨的圖書館閱讀蘋果日報,它含有許多內容和籃球雜誌─XXL,它會介紹球員的奮鬥過程。6. 那個經營鐵工廠的有錢商人有好幾台超跑,在它們之中,法拉利是他的最愛。他開它在半夜的多線道馬路上飆車。7. 在遊樂園中,氣球對小孩很有吸引力,他們希望父母去買。而棉花糖也是對他們很可口,也要求父母去買。8. 政府破壞市民房子的政策使人們生氣,而去市政府的廣場前靜坐抗議。
Update:
9. 那個和妻子結婚超過10年的丈夫,在看到他的妻子和不認識的男人睡覺之後,他變得很生氣。
10. 看起來像蛇和牛的混合物的龍,在世界上被認為是不存在的。但許多人認為牠們有神祕的力量。
煩請各位英文專家、學者看看我寫的英文造句有沒有文法不對、語意不順或是可以改進或加強的地方,先謝謝大大了啊!
Update 2:
To各位英文專家、學者:因為我的問題內容皆由word編輯好完成,再整個複製過來到知識家尋求批改,但全部貼上完成後會導致有些英文單字莫名黏在一起。針對此問題,我已發問類似問題尋求解決方法中,造成你的不便,請見諒!
Update 3:
下面中文翻譯更正
1.那個送貨員靠GPS〝開車沿著〞充滿樹木的馬路上走,他似乎緊張地迷路了15分鐘。
謝謝〝理查〞大大明察秋毫點出錯誤
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Kelly avatar
By Kelly
at 2013-11-14T07:56
1. The deliveryman followed the direction of GPS to drove along a road which was full of weeds by his GPS, but he seemed tensely lost tensely for fifty minutes (tensely). 2. The short engineer who did not have a girlfriend had worked at the factory over thirteen hours, and so he took a break to brew a coffee.文字前後敘述應合於”因果”關係,如這位工程師已然工作多時,所以他抽空去休息,前是因,後是果,連接詞應是”因此”,使用”然後”並把事的因果表示出來,讓前”工作超過13小時”乙事顯得多餘。3. When the perfumes in of department store had been sold out in the annual sale, the baggage in of department the store was also sold out later. 產品屬於百貨公司,應使用off。4. Boss’s Philippine servant maid, who with short hair, always adds pepper to beef noodles, because she is has used to eating spicily for a lot of years. 女僕maidbe used to 習慣於+名詞或動名詞Vingused to 慣於,過去常常做某事 我覺得”常常做何事好多年”比”習慣……好多年”在敘述上比較合於一般的陳述習慣。因此我把它改為used to.句中後有已經歷的一段時間,應使用現在完成式 have(has) used to ,而 used to +原形動詞,非Ving 分詞。5. I am usually to like to read the Apple Daily that contains a large number of contents, and the basketball magazine –XXL which introduces a player’s striving process, in the library Sunday morning , Sunday. 第一行的like是動詞, be動詞後應加名詞、形容詞、動名詞、分詞,但不可是動詞。6. The wealthy merchant, who managed a iron factory, owned several super cars and among them, Ferrari is his the most favorite, and he drove one it to race wildly at high speed on the road of greater measure at midnight. 我覺得第一行使用插句的形式較好。Favorite 本身就有”最喜歡的意思,不可再加the most。7. In amusement park, Balloons is are attractive for to kids to, so they hope to buy them by their parents to buy it and cotton candy is delicious for kids them to so that they ask for it to eat in amusement park, too. 8. The policy of wrecking tearing down civic houses of government angered people to sit in stilly in the square to protest on the square of being in front of the city government.應是政府”拆除”政策,而不是”破壞”政策。
2013-11-13 15:49:04 補充:
9.The husband, who has married his wife more than ten years, turned into fury when he saw that his wife was sleeping with another man whom he didn’t recognize.
我覺得第一行使用插句比較好,才不會對此人過多的敘述文句後,才看到後面的重點”出牆”。(讀者可將插句稍留後看,先看重點敘述)
在敘述上應是先說 husband,而後以代名詞he來代表husband。
與某人結婚 marry +某人,之間沒有to。
2013-11-13 15:49:32 補充:
10. Dragon, which looks like a mixture of snake and bull, was consider not existing in the world, while various people believe them have mysterious power .
在說明某件恒常的事實時,應使用現在式,因此龍的長相應使用現在式 looks like。
“被認為不存在” 和 “很多人相信它有神秘力量” 兩句並不是相關句,使用”相反”轉折字 but,並不合適。若要用but來轉折,前後句子的意義應有關,如”龍被認為不存在,但却有很多人用它來辟邪祈福”。
2013-11-13 16:47:54 補充:
8.The policy of tearing down civic houses of government angered people to sit stilly in the square to protest in front of the city government.
修正如下:
8.The policy of tearing down civic houses of government angered people to sit stilly in the square, in front of the city government, to protest .
2013-11-13 18:03:40 補充:
補充
boss 的所有格為 boss's, 非 boss' 。
係據文法,單數名詞之最後字母為s者,其所有格仍維持字尾非s的單數名詞所有格之形式,發音則為"siz"。
在字尾s上方畫一撇表示為所有格, 僅限於複數名詞。
2013-11-15 09:12:30 補充:
修正文字
2.使用”然後”並(未)把事的因果表示出來,讓前”工作超過13小時”乙事顯得多餘。
3.產品屬於百貨公司,應使用(of)。
Kelly avatar
By Kelly
at 2013-11-15T12:56
瞭解一次、多一次的保障。尋找八大行業工作。必須謹慎小心一點。
小巴常說:保險跟冒險只差一個字,意義卻是大不同!
一通電話、一次詢問。都是為自己的著想。
Steve avatar
By Steve
at 2013-11-16T09:28
因發問者評價有300字的限制,故移到〝意見〞補充我的心得
關於我問的〝怎麼解決我從word貼過來到知識家的文章內容不會跑掉呢?〞問題已進入投票狀態,因實在是不知道選擇哪位大大才好。而我以後發問的內容呢!我不會輸入在word上,而是直接輸入在知識家上吧!這也算是〝道家〞思想中的〝清靜無為〞吧!其實我也算是怕麻煩,就先維持直接輸入在知識家上。
啊!〝非天使〞大大出門要穿暖和點。現在已經快要進入12月了也就是冬天了,我想天氣只會越來越冷。讓我想到以前讀國中時,還會去買暖暖包,但其實只要穿得夠溫暖,就不至於手腳冰冷,自然也不需要那種東西了。除了像是某些藝人在什麼冰天雪地或極道地區工作時才會需要吧!
Annie avatar
By Annie
at 2013-11-14T12:59
"那個送貨員靠GPS充滿樹木的馬路走". 這是什麼意思?

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