英文文法修正 - 籃球
By Charlie
at 2011-01-05T00:00
at 2011-01-05T00:00
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前陣子寫一些文章.但是文法上有點問題,
請大家幫我一下修正語法與文法..謝謝!
內容如下:
Tuesday was Basketball's day, The Season near dry deason..,But , Why every time of play basketball's day before 2 hours.. is raining.... raining... raining... .......and still raining... still still still raing...+ing +ing +ing
It was a coincidence raining that it was basketball's day every once of week .The Beasketball's day change to Drink's day.. I want to thank to rain.So... Today is headache the same ...... I hate raining... because It let me headache ..If all of my friend tell me ."to give up drinking" ,, you first need to tell to God . "Don't Rain..... "
Update:
主題:下雨讓我頭痛.
星期二是打籃球日, 這季節因該是旱季,可是為何這邊每次到玩球日前兩小時,就開始下雨.
下雨..下雨,,,,,下雨.. 一直持續下....
在每周一次的 "籃球日",它是如此巧合的下雨, ,我要感謝下雨...因為下與我把籃球日改成喝酒日, 所以今天一樣頭痛
(ps:因為酒喝多了..頭痛),,我恨下雨..因為他讓我頭痛.
如果我朋友勸我戒酒, 你第一必需要告訴老天, 別下雨..
大概是這意思.
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All Comments
By Hamiltion
at 2011-01-07T00:58
at 2011-01-07T00:58
光看原文似乎有點看不懂耶?
麻煩你列一下囉~~
2011-01-08 23:43:24 補充:
那我就直接用你的中文打我的寫法囉!
因為我不會改別人作文...希望有幫助....
Tuesday was a basketball day. This season should be a dry season, but why everytime it began to rain two hours before I play basketball. Raining, raining and raining. On the ''basketball day'' once a week, it just started raining accidently.
2011-01-08 23:44:03 補充:
Thanks to the rain, because of it, I changed basketball day into drinking day, so I'm still having a headache today. I hate raining, because it makes me have a headache. If my friends suggest me to quit drinking, you first must to tell God, stop raining.
因為補充內容字數有限
分兩篇打
...我盡力寫出來了
錯了莫怪
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