急~急~我的英文老師要我寫作文~~題目myhobby - 籃球

(開文)There are many things that I like to do during my free time. I like to read novels, listen to the music, and watch TV. But, among these hobbies that I have, playing basketball is the one that I enjoy the most because I am good at it and it provides me with an opportunity to be around with my friends.
(主文1)I started playing basketball when I was in grade 6. At the beginning, I did not play well at this sports. Maybe it was endless hours of practise of jump shooting that helped me with my skill, so after a few months, I had become a better basketball player in my class. Whenever I was in the ball court, i feel I am in control, and because of this level of confidence have I enjoyed playing basketball this much.
(主文2)Basketball is a huge sports in my school. Almost every boy in my class knows how to play basketball and loves playing basketball after school. My friends all love basketball, and whenver there is holiday or weekend, we would come out and play basketball near our neighborhood. It is fun to play with my friends and because of this sports, my friends and I are better than just ordinary friends.
(結尾)I have many hobbies. I enjoy reading quite much, and I love listening to the music when I take bus or walk on the street. But they are not my favorite hobby. My favorite hobby is to play basketball and I wish that my
brothers would like to join me for this sports because I think they study
too hard for school exames.
我不知道這樣寫有沒有fit你的程度
我只好就簡單的寫一下
如果你看到比較不懂的單字你就問我
我幫你改一下

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開文)There are many things that I like to do during my free time. I like to read novels, listen to the music, and watch TV. But, among these hobbies that I have, playing basketball is the one that I enjoy the most because I am good at it and it provides me with an opportunity to be around with my friends.
(主文1)I started playing basketball when I was in grade 6. At the beginning, I did not play well at this sports. Maybe it was endless hours of practise of jump shooting that helped me with my skill, so after a few months, I had become a better basketball player in my class. Whenever I was in the ball court, i feel I am in control, and because of this level of confidence have I enjoyed playing basketball this much.
(主文2)Basketball is a huge sports in my school. Almost every boy in my class knows how to play basketball and loves playing basketball after school. My friends all love basketball, and whenver there is holiday or weekend, we would come out and play basketball near our neighborhood. It is fun to play with my friends and because of this sports, my friends and I are better than just ordinary friends.
(結尾)I have many hobbies. I enjoy reading quite much, and I love listening to the music when I take bus or walk on the street. But they are not my favorite hobby. My favorite hobby is to play basketball and I wish that my
brothers would like to join me for this sports because I think they study
too hard for school exames.