很急~煩請英文達人幫我修改英文自傳 - 運動

我想我的文法或用詞一定有不對的地方,以下是我的中文及英文自傳,麻煩各位大大檢查一下,謝謝~~
中文自傳:
我的名字是***從小即在台中市長大，父親目前在台北就職，母親則是職業婦女，還有兩個弟弟分別就讀國中及高中，家中經濟狀況還算普通，家人彼此相處融洽。受到週遭長輩的教育影響，養成我個性上的隨和及適應環境能力佳，也很容易與人相處；我的興趣是閱讀、聽音樂及瀏覽網頁，喜歡的運動是高爾夫。
我從幼稚園開始讀起，也開始了第一次的英文教學因此對字母有了一番認識，就讀國小期間也到補習班學習英文，為日後奠下一些基礎；國中也是在離家近的公立國中畢業，之後則在**科大五專部求學；主修為會計，到目前為止所學的會計有初等、中等、高等會計學以及銀行會計、成本會計、稅務會計及政府會計，從三年級開始到四年級所學的中等會計、成本會計等成績較好；當然也有修過統計學、微積分、商業心理學、經濟學等等專業科目。
英文自傳:
My name is ***grows up since childhood in Taichung，the father at present works in Taipei，the mother is the professional woman，also some two younger brothers separately go study in the country and the high school，in the family the economical condition also calculates ordinary，My family member each other is together harmoniously。Receives the week to suffer elder\'s education influence，fosters in my individuality the amiability and adapts to circumstances or environment the ability to be good，also very easily is together with the person；My interest is reading、listens to the music and the browsing homepage，Likes the movement is a golf。
I start from the preschool to read，started the first English teaching therefore had an understanding to the letter，in country small period also arrives the supplementary class to study English，for will establish some foundations in the future；In the country also is in near leaves home male to found a nation graduates，counts the branch in Science and Technology Institute of China five specially accountant to study afterwards；Majors in for accountant，therefore so far studies accountant has Primary Accountant、Intermediate Accountant、Advance Accountant and Bank Accountant、Cost Accountant、Tax Accountant and Government Accountant，starts medium result and so on Primary Accountant, Cost Accounting from three grades which studies to four grades is better，certainly also has majored in Statistics、Fluxionary calculus、Business Psychology、Economic and so on specialized subject。