誰可幫幫我的英文演講呀(題目:MYFAMILY) - 運動

Odelette avatar
By Odelette
at 2011-03-20T00:00

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時間不多了
希望能儘快幫我趕出長又生動(可做出動作)的演講
題目是我的家庭
我有寫一些 只是最多演講1分鐘
能幫我多增加一些嘛(像家人性格特色 喜歡做啥 盡量加長到3分鐘)??
掰的也行(不要太過火)
還有幫我修正一些文法
以下是可修正內容(幫填進去)
我家有父母 和1位哥哥(國中生)
我也是國中生
哥哥喜歡打籃球
我也喜歡打籃球
爸爸喜歡和媽媽去運動 散步 爬山等休閒運動
我是開心果 喜歡笑
I have a warm and cute family. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother,elder brother and I. I love my dad. He's the best father in the world. He works at a bus station. And my mom, she is a cook and she works at a elementary school. She always takes care of us. She cooks delicious food for us every day. She always smiles, and she's kind to everyone. My brother is a junior high school student. He's very smart. He always teaches me some questions that I am understand, and help with my homework. And I, I am a junior high school student,too. I am in the grade 1 this year. When weekend comes, my family goes out. Sometimes, we go hiking or Mountain climbing. Every moment with my famail is unforgetable memory. I love them.

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Edward Lewis avatar
By Edward Lewis
at 2011-03-23T05:16
I have an unique family. There are four members in my family: my dad, mom, my elder brother and myself. I love my dad, he is the best father in the world and a role figure in the family. He works at the bus station and mom works at the elementary school. Mom is an outstanding cook and she always take care of us. No matter how bad is the situation, she is always smiling and kind to everyone. When she prepares any meals, she always amaze us with delicious food.
My brother is a junior high school student and very smart. He often helps me with questions or homeworks that I don't understand. And myself, I'm a junior high student too but just start as freshman this year.
When it comes to weekend, me and my family enjoy going out for hiking at the mountain or take a drive and enjoy the lovely warm day. Every moments that I spend with my family is an unforgettable memory that I will treasure in my heart. I love them no matter how...my family.

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Noah avatar
By Noah
at 2011-03-20T00:00
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Elma avatar
By Elma
at 2011-03-20T00:00
如何用英文簡單介紹桌球
如題 ..
例: 桌球是個簡單又安全的運動
它不像棒球 足球 籃球需要很多人

事實上他只需要兩個人就可以玩了
�� ...

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Todd Johnson avatar
By Todd Johnson
at 2011-03-20T00:00
誰可以給我Free Style的主程式
我都不能下載
也找不到光碟
幫幫忙阿
我及時通wei851018

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Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2011-03-20T00:00
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