時間不多了
希望能儘快幫我趕出長又生動（可做出動作）的演講
題目是我的家庭
我有寫一些 只是最多演講1分鐘
能幫我多增加一些嘛（像家人性格特色 喜歡做啥 盡量加長到3分鐘）？？
掰的也行（不要太過火）
還有幫我修正一些文法
以下是可修正內容（幫填進去）
我家有父母 和1位哥哥（國中生）
我也是國中生
哥哥喜歡打籃球
我也喜歡打籃球
爸爸喜歡和媽媽去運動 散步 爬山等休閒運動
我是開心果 喜歡笑
I have a warm and cute family. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother,elder brother and I. I love my dad. He's the best father in the world. He works at a bus station. And my mom, she is a cook and she works at a elementary school. She always takes care of us. She cooks delicious food for us every day. She always smiles, and she's kind to everyone. My brother is a junior high school student. He's very smart. He always teaches me some questions that I am understand, and help with my homework. And I, I am a junior high school student,too. I am in the grade 1 this year. When weekend comes, my family goes out. Sometimes, we go hiking or Mountain climbing. Every moment with my famail is unforgetable memory. I love them.
希望能儘快幫我趕出長又生動（可做出動作）的演講
題目是我的家庭
我有寫一些 只是最多演講1分鐘
能幫我多增加一些嘛（像家人性格特色 喜歡做啥 盡量加長到3分鐘）？？
掰的也行（不要太過火）
還有幫我修正一些文法
以下是可修正內容（幫填進去）
我家有父母 和1位哥哥（國中生）
我也是國中生
哥哥喜歡打籃球
我也喜歡打籃球
爸爸喜歡和媽媽去運動 散步 爬山等休閒運動
我是開心果 喜歡笑
I have a warm and cute family. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother,elder brother and I. I love my dad. He's the best father in the world. He works at a bus station. And my mom, she is a cook and she works at a elementary school. She always takes care of us. She cooks delicious food for us every day. She always smiles, and she's kind to everyone. My brother is a junior high school student. He's very smart. He always teaches me some questions that I am understand, and help with my homework. And I, I am a junior high school student,too. I am in the grade 1 this year. When weekend comes, my family goes out. Sometimes, we go hiking or Mountain climbing. Every moment with my famail is unforgetable memory. I love them.
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My brother is a junior high school student and very smart. He often helps me with questions or homeworks that I don't understand. And myself, I'm a junior high student too but just start as freshman this year.
When it comes to weekend, me and my family enjoy going out for hiking at the mountain or take a drive and enjoy the lovely warm day. Every moments that I spend with my family is an unforgettable memory that I will treasure in my heart. I love them no matter how...my family.