拜託幫我檢查一下我的英文自我介紹 - 運動

By Eartha
at 2009-04-05T00:00
at 2009-04-05T00:00
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幫我看看我的英文自我介紹有沒有文法錯誤
或者是句子不對 例如 中文是英文之類的
順便幫我改看看 謝謝
My name is XXX. I often surf the net to look the news to realize what
happen at Taiwan every day. Because I am a Taiwanese , so I should
know what happen in my country. In addition , I always to play
basketball on weekend. Because I think not only to study which is
important but also to have a healthy body . So playing basketball is
my interesting , it also is that I keep a healthy body's method . Thus
if studying is center of my life in now, then sports will be my second
importance .
Update:
TO 皓皓
我也覺得那兩句怪怪的
可是我也不知道哪裡不對
應該要怎麼寫才好..
Update 2:
我把我的中文翻譯出來好了..
我的名子是XXX 我每天經常會上網看新聞了解一下在台灣發生了什麼事 因為我是台灣人所以我應該要知道自己的國家發生了什麼事
此外 我總會在週末時去打籃球 因為我認為不只讀書很重要 擁有一個健康的身體也很重要 所以打籃球是我的興趣也是我維持健康身體的方法
因此如果讀書是我現在生活的重心 那麼運動將是我第二重要的事
最後一句我真的不知怎麼寫成英文 總覺得我寫的怪怪的
可以幫我翻一下嗎
或者是句子不對 例如 中文是英文之類的
順便幫我改看看 謝謝
My name is XXX. I often surf the net to look the news to realize what
happen at Taiwan every day. Because I am a Taiwanese , so I should
know what happen in my country. In addition , I always to play
basketball on weekend. Because I think not only to study which is
important but also to have a healthy body . So playing basketball is
my interesting , it also is that I keep a healthy body's method . Thus
if studying is center of my life in now, then sports will be my second
importance .
Update:
TO 皓皓
我也覺得那兩句怪怪的
可是我也不知道哪裡不對
應該要怎麼寫才好..
Update 2:
我把我的中文翻譯出來好了..
我的名子是XXX 我每天經常會上網看新聞了解一下在台灣發生了什麼事 因為我是台灣人所以我應該要知道自己的國家發生了什麼事
此外 我總會在週末時去打籃球 因為我認為不只讀書很重要 擁有一個健康的身體也很重要 所以打籃球是我的興趣也是我維持健康身體的方法
因此如果讀書是我現在生活的重心 那麼運動將是我第二重要的事
最後一句我真的不知怎麼寫成英文 總覺得我寫的怪怪的
可以幫我翻一下嗎
All Comments

By Lily
at 2009-04-05T03:14
at 2009-04-05T03:14
every day. Since I am a Taiwanese, I should know what is happening in my country.
In addition , I always play basketball on the weekend. The reason is that I think studying
is not the only thing which is important but also maintaining a healthy body. So, playing
basketball is my interest and it is also the method keeps me staying healthy. Thus, if
studying is the center of my life now, then exercise will be the second important thing to
me.

By Kelly
at 2009-04-08T23:23
at 2009-04-08T23:23
有時候不懂你要表達什麼,
雖然說英文沒有真的很好很好,
我呆在美國8個月多了
很抱歉,
不太能幫上你

By Frederica
at 2009-04-07T06:30
at 2009-04-07T06:30
我英文也不是太好....
Because I am a Taiwanese
我在美國六個月了
我們都講
Because I am Taiwanese(chinese)都沒加a
I always to play
basketball on weekend---應該不要加 to
So playing basketball is my interesting--interesting應該用hobby比較恰當
我差不多只能這樣
有些句子怪怪的
可是我不知怎改
抱歉啦
像
Because I think not only to study which is
important but also to have a healthy body
it also is that I keep a healthy body's method
這兩句感覺很怪
加油啦
2009-04-05 14:24:41 補充:
我覺得最後一句是
If learning is the center of my life, then, the sports will be my second
importance .
這樣比較順
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