請幫我中翻英這一句和當我檢查文法有沒有錯誤!!!急須! - 籃球

Olive avatar
By Olive
at 2008-09-04T00:00

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我先問這一句翻英文
My favorite sport is play basketball, 然後我想接

因為我哥從六年前就開始教我打(籃球)了
(我寫成
because my brother taught me played basketball six years ago
剛剛才發現錯誤 !!)

(我不要爛翻譯機 除非大大們的翻譯機很好
不過自己翻也可!!!)
( 括號表示我要問 需不需要在加!!)
我的文章:
My name is Dennis Chan. I’m thirteen years old. I was studied in Dxx-Hxx elementary school. I have two older brothers, but my brothers are twenty-one and twenty-three. My favorite sport is play basketball, 因為我哥從六年前就開始教我打(籃球)了.But I’m hate running playground very much. I’m very like math and science, because I like electron. But my science isn’t only good. I’m good at math and physical education, but everyone should to know I’m not better most. I’m so enthusiastic. So every one want to help, I can help you.
Update:
回答1
你用的被動式 文法錯誤+這樣寫會成 「被我」 怪怪的 不對拉!!
Update 2:
因為我哥從六年前就開始教我打(籃球),然後一直到現在
這句才是我要的 這樣才能感覺發揮的比較好!!
快拉!!!!
(我盡量跟我英文老師延時間 麻煩各位大大快幫一下 (下禮拜1教ㄅ...)
Update 3:
第二位 神拉!!!
至於用teaching 這部份 我在翻翻自己補班的筆記
你用的應該是「現在過去式」吧! (記得好像有這時態!!)
Update 4:
enough 本意約是指 充滿吧?!
本句是指沒有到出師的地方 吧!!??
先用你的 不過我還是要甄選最佳 直到這星期天......
Update 5:
第三位回答者不錯 斟酌!!!!
我倆篇都先使用好了
(第三為有點拍馬屁......)
Update 6:
等等 我是要拿做當國1 自我介紹 (英老說的)
請問一下 我這一句 I was studied in Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
大家知道 我的意思是「我以前讀xx小學」ㄇ??
Update 7:
喔喔 好ㄅ (我是說第二位回答者)
至於第三位 恩......沒補充原因 正確度難思考....
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Donna avatar
By Donna
at 2008-09-06T20:18
My name is Dennis Chan. I’m thirteen years old. I was studied in Dxx-Hxx elementary school. I have two older brothers, but my brothers are twenty-one and twenty-three. My favorite sport is play basketball, 因為我哥從六年前就開始教我打(籃球)了because my brother taught me how to play basketball was six years ago.But I’m hate running playground very much. (I’m very like math)I love math and science very much, because I like electron. But my science isn’t only good. I’m also good at math and physical education, but everyone should to know I’m not better most. I’m so enthusiastic. (So every one want to help, I can help you). If every one need to help I will help them.如果任何人需要幫助我會幫他們. everyone是第三人稱複數要用them 他們
我幫你看了一下
你寫得太好了對一個13歲小學生
只有一點點小地方加強一下就可以更順了
Good job !!
2008-09-04 21:43:07 補充:
唉呦 !! 我那有
我 13 歲那年 連 ABCDEFG 都不會
別說寫什麼
我是實話實說
你真的很棒!!
2008-09-04 21:45:23 補充:
請問一下 我這一句 I was studied in Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
大家知道 我的意思是「我以前讀xx小學」ㄇ??
知道阿
2008-09-04 21:49:03 補充:
但是你說國一介紹要用 最好改成
I graduated from Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
最正確的 okay?
Belly avatar
By Belly
at 2008-09-08T08:50
1. My name is Dennis Chan. I'm thirteen years old. I was studied in Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
前面兩句是ok的,但第三句建議改成我從...畢業的會更好。
→ My name is Dennis Chan. I'm thirteen years old. I graduated from Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
2. I have two older brothers, but my brothers are twenty-one and twenty-three.
為什麼你要用 but(但是) 呢?,用 and(而且) 就好啦。
→ I have two older brothers; one (of my brothers) is twenty-one and the other is twenty-three.
[因為只有兩個,所以用 one...the other...,這個如果不會再問。]
3. My favorite sport is play basketball, 因為我哥從六年前就開始教我打(籃球)了.
不可以用 play basketball,因為它是動詞,要用動名詞當主詞補語用。
→ My favorite sport is playing basketball because my (older) brother has taught me playing baseketball since six years ago.
[從六年前持續,所以要用現在完成式。]
4. But I'm hate running playground very much.
hate 是動詞喔,所以不可以出現 am 了。
→ However, I hate running playground very much.
[用 however 是寫作常用的,but 也可以。]
5. I'm very like math and science, because I like electron.
非常喜歡 like...very much,不會用 very like。
→ I like math and science very much because I am interested in electron.
[ be interested in 對...感興趣。]
6. But my science isn't only good. I'm good at math and physical education, but everyone should to know I'm not better most.
為什麼要加 only 呢?我搞不懂耶,should 是助動詞喔,怎會接 to 呢?
→ However, my science isn't good. I'm good at math and physical education, but as you know, I'm not better most.
[ as you know 眾所皆知。]
7. I'm so enthusiastic. So every one want to help, I can help you.
要出現第二個動詞就要有連接詞喔。
→ I'm so enthusiastic that everyone asks for help, and then I will help you.
[so adj. that 如此...以致於;ask for help 尋求幫助。]
有問題再問喔
2008-09-04 22:56:55 補充:
3. 教打籃球 用 taught me how to play baseketball 比較好
Mia avatar
By Mia
at 2008-09-07T00:25
My favorite sport is play basketball 是錯的,應該是My favorite sport is playing basketball.
My name is Dennis Chan. I'm thirteen years old. I study in Dxx-Hxx elementary school. I have two older brothers. One of my brothers is twenty-one years old, and another is twenty-three years old. My favorite sport is playing basketball, because my brothers have taught me how to play basketball since six years ago.But I hate running the playground very much. I like math and science a lot, because I like electron. But my science isn't good enough. I'm good at math and physical education, but everyone should know I'm not better the most. I'm so enthusiastic. So everyone wants help, I will help you.
我不是很了解你一些句子所要表達的意思,但我確定我寫的文法不會有錯
Thomas avatar
By Thomas
at 2008-09-06T08:18
My name is Dennis Chan. I’m thirteen years old. I (was studied)study in Dxx-Hxx elementary school. I have two older brothers, (but)and my brothers are twenty-one and twenty-three. My favorite sport is( play)省略 basketball, 因為我哥從六年前就開始教我打(籃球)了My brother has been teaching me basketball since 6 years ago.(But)省略 (I’m) I hate running (加 at/in the ) playground very much (I’m) I (very)省略 like math and science(,)省略 because I like (electron) electronics. But my science isn’t (only)省略 good enough. I’m good at math and physical education(, but everyone should to know I’m not better most) though they are not the best in class(我想你在這裡想要說雖然喜歡數學和物理但不是斑上最棒的或是你最拿手的). I’m so enthusiastic. So( every one) if anyone (want to) need my help, I (can) am glad to help (you)省略.
整偏文法都幫你看過
希望你可以看的懂
2008-09-05 16:17:34 補充:
sorry, 若是已經畢業了
I (was studied)study in Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
這句應改成
I graduated from the Dxx-Hxx elementary school.
Kyle avatar
By Kyle
at 2008-09-07T15:00
my brother have been taught me how to play 6 years before.
這樣因該對吧~~~

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Isabella avatar
By Isabella
at 2008-09-04T00:00
我們要做畢業專題
題目已訂好了..
主題是:街頭文化
我們想到的街頭文化有..
街頭籃球、滑板、塗鴉、街舞、單車
那還有什麼呢?!
請大�� ...

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Freda avatar
By Freda
at 2008-09-04T00:00
九月三號開測低遊戲= =
今日開OB~官方開放下載~
我家電腦不知道怎麼了= =
就是不會更新~官方要求要2.9版
可是官方只開放到2.5版低手動更新~
...

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James avatar
By James
at 2008-09-03T00:00
為什麼我籃球火進不去!
已經9/3號ㄌ!
我的遊戲版本是2.7
我每次按起動的時後只出現遊標然後就不見了!
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Belly avatar
By Belly
at 2008-09-03T00:00
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我已經安裝好了
就差更新這個步驟
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Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2008-09-03T00:00
我的老師是劉志華
請問遠東有沒有游泳課...?
如果有沒去上會不會怎樣....
我看課程內容是寫
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2.籃球
3.體適能
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