英文自傳修改 - 運動
By Margaret
at 2013-02-21T00:00
at 2013-02-21T00:00
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因為是自己一句一句翻過來的~文法上可能有很大的問題~
希望好心人可以幫忙修正一下^^"
Hi:
My name is OOO. Nickname is OO.30 years old. My favorite is sport, sing song and travel. There are 6 people in my family, including my mother, my brother, my three sisters, and me. They are married and enjoy in the work.
When I am a student, a lot of time to read and write. In college, go to ping-pong group and to obtain good result in the game. Singing contest won the champion with my classmates.
I join the army, exercise strong willpower.
To participate in the war simulation that is very special experience.
After military life.I Press served as the business work. Because pay visit many school, so I know road around Taiwan, and not afraid to Unfamiliar customers. I have good relation to my colleagues. When I leave company I feel a little sad.
I am hoping to get better life and to be a better man than today,
I make this decision that is going to Japan.
Before going abroad, I motorcycle around Taiwan by myself. Join to Marathon and triathlon. I got working holiday visa Japan, and travel to Japan one year along.
When I am in Japan, l also to learn language, and did many kinds of work.
Have done Famer, hotel waiter and aquaculture.
I back to Taiwan this year.
I hope use my learn to my work.
If you will give me a chance, I will do my best for company.
Thank you.
大家好:
我叫ooo,大家可以叫我oo。
今年30歲,喜歡運動、歌唱,也喜歡旅遊。
家裡有媽媽,一位哥哥及三位姐姐皆已成家。
在各自的行業裡亦有不錯的成績。
求學期間喜歡寫作,所以大多時間都在閱讀。
也累積不少的詩詞小品,曾在系刊中刊出。
大學參加了桌球社,拿過校際盃的殿軍。
系際盃的卡拉OK大賽,也得到團體組的冠軍。
當兵很幸運的抽到了”海軍陸戰隊”。
讓自己培養出更強韌的意志。
期間下過三次基地,也擔任過作戰士及值星下士,
參與演習也是十分特別的經驗。
退伍後第一份工作就是在oo書局擔任業務。
除了熟悉各地區的道路網絡外,
也練就了面對陌生客戶毫不畏懼的勇氣,
在學校裡的服務也受到老師們的肯定。
與公司的同事相處也十分融洽,
所以離職時在歡送會也十分不捨。
其實離開一個穩定的工作下了很大的決心,
無非就是希望自己能夠過得比現在更好。
所以離職後我給自己一年的時間沉澱與挑戰自我。
除了環島、參加馬拉松和鐵人三項之外,
我也申請了日本打工簽證,獨自一人前往日本體驗生活。
在日本一年的期間裡,除了學習語言,
也在日本各地旅遊,體驗不同的生活。
除了農場跟飯店,也當過水產公司的廠務人員。
回到了台灣,不僅希望自己在語言上更加精進,
也希望能在適合的職位上一展所學。
希望貴公司能給我這個機會,
我也將虛心學習,體現自我的價值。
希望好心人可以幫忙修正一下^^"
Hi:
My name is OOO. Nickname is OO.30 years old. My favorite is sport, sing song and travel. There are 6 people in my family, including my mother, my brother, my three sisters, and me. They are married and enjoy in the work.
When I am a student, a lot of time to read and write. In college, go to ping-pong group and to obtain good result in the game. Singing contest won the champion with my classmates.
I join the army, exercise strong willpower.
To participate in the war simulation that is very special experience.
After military life.I Press served as the business work. Because pay visit many school, so I know road around Taiwan, and not afraid to Unfamiliar customers. I have good relation to my colleagues. When I leave company I feel a little sad.
I am hoping to get better life and to be a better man than today,
I make this decision that is going to Japan.
Before going abroad, I motorcycle around Taiwan by myself. Join to Marathon and triathlon. I got working holiday visa Japan, and travel to Japan one year along.
When I am in Japan, l also to learn language, and did many kinds of work.
Have done Famer, hotel waiter and aquaculture.
I back to Taiwan this year.
I hope use my learn to my work.
If you will give me a chance, I will do my best for company.
Thank you.
大家好:
我叫ooo,大家可以叫我oo。
今年30歲,喜歡運動、歌唱,也喜歡旅遊。
家裡有媽媽,一位哥哥及三位姐姐皆已成家。
在各自的行業裡亦有不錯的成績。
求學期間喜歡寫作,所以大多時間都在閱讀。
也累積不少的詩詞小品,曾在系刊中刊出。
大學參加了桌球社,拿過校際盃的殿軍。
系際盃的卡拉OK大賽,也得到團體組的冠軍。
當兵很幸運的抽到了”海軍陸戰隊”。
讓自己培養出更強韌的意志。
期間下過三次基地,也擔任過作戰士及值星下士,
參與演習也是十分特別的經驗。
退伍後第一份工作就是在oo書局擔任業務。
除了熟悉各地區的道路網絡外,
也練就了面對陌生客戶毫不畏懼的勇氣,
在學校裡的服務也受到老師們的肯定。
與公司的同事相處也十分融洽,
所以離職時在歡送會也十分不捨。
其實離開一個穩定的工作下了很大的決心,
無非就是希望自己能夠過得比現在更好。
所以離職後我給自己一年的時間沉澱與挑戰自我。
除了環島、參加馬拉松和鐵人三項之外,
我也申請了日本打工簽證,獨自一人前往日本體驗生活。
在日本一年的期間裡,除了學習語言,
也在日本各地旅遊,體驗不同的生活。
除了農場跟飯店,也當過水產公司的廠務人員。
回到了台灣,不僅希望自己在語言上更加精進,
也希望能在適合的職位上一展所學。
希望貴公司能給我這個機會,
我也將虛心學習,體現自我的價值。
All Comments
By Faithe
at 2013-02-22T21:48
at 2013-02-22T21:48
My name is OOO. Nickname is OO OO is my nickname, 30 years old. My favorite hobbies is are sport, singing songs and going traveling. There are 6 people persons in my family, including my mother, my one older brother, my three older sisters, and me I. They all are had married and enjoying and doing well in the their work jobs.
When I am was a student, I spent a lot of time to read and write. In college, go to I had been joined a ping-pong group and to obtained a good result (the fourth) in the inter-school game and had been won an inter-department group singing contest won the champion with my classmates.
When I joined the army, which had offered me a chance to exercise to get a strong willpower, and participating in the simulate war simulation that is was a very special experience.
After the military life, the first job I got was being a staff in a book publishing company I Press served as the business work. Because I should pay my time to visit many schools, so I know all the roads around Taiwan, and not afraid to face unfamiliar customers. For I had good relations to with my colleagues, when I left that company I felt a little sad. Actually, it was not so easy to leave a stable job, but I am was hoping to get better life and to be a better man than today, so I made this hard decision that is to going to Japan for study and getting working experiences.
Before going abroad, I motorcycled around Taiwan by myself. Joined Marathon and triathlon. I got applied for a working holiday visa from Japan, and traveled to Japan there one year alone.
When I am was staying in Japan, l also to went to learn the language, and did took many kinds of work jobs such as Have done being a worker in a farmer, a hotel waiter and a staff in an aquatic company.
I came back to Taiwan this year, I hope to use what I had learnt to my future work well and make my language skill better continuously, If you will give me I wish to obtain a chance from you,
2013-02-21 16:42:05 補充:
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and I will do my best for the company.
Thank you for your attention.
By Rae
at 2013-02-22T13:22
at 2013-02-22T13:22
My name is OOO. Nickname is OO.30 years old. I love playing sport, singing and travelling. There are 6 people in my family: my mother, my brother, my three sisters and me. They are married and have successful career.
When I was a student, I spent a lot of time to read and write. In college, I went to Ping-Pong club and came fourth in the tournament. I also won the singing contest with my friends.
I joined the army which made my willpower strong.
I also participated in the war simulation; it was a very special experience.
After military life I worked in OO bookshop as a business man. That experience not only allows me to have the courage to talk to stranger, but also makes me familiar to roads all around Taiwan. I had a good relation to my colleagues.
I decided to quit the job and go to Japan and because that I hope to get better life and to be a better man than today,
So I trained myself before going abroad, I motorcycle around Taiwan by myself, join to Marathon and participate in triathlon. I got working holiday visa in Japan and stayed in Japan for a year.
In Japan, besides learning language, I also did many kinds of work.
I have been a famer, hotel waiter and a worker in Seafood Company.
I came back to Taiwan this year. I hope that I can improve in language and use my talents towards my job.
If you give me a chance, I will do my best for the company.
Thank you
2013-02-21 15:09:30 補充:
我盡量照著你的意思去翻了
考慮補強英文 你絕對能夠過得比現在更好
謝謝
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