急!英文面試翻譯 - 羽球

因為面試的日子快到了 這幾天才做好自我介紹 也沒有時間回到學校請老師翻譯
我知道比較多>< 但其實已經有刪減了翻譯好後還會再刪減 因為自己實在沒有能力翻譯又不想用範例的方式 所以請教專業高手幫忙!!! 拜託了~~~感謝
自我介紹
教授們好,我的名子叫做XXX,畢業於XX高中應用英文科,我的個性活潑開朗常以樂觀的態度來面對每件不如意的事,興趣是看電影喜歡從故事情裡學到東西
在高中有許多活動,高一二時皆參與了英語情境會話比賽和英語成果發表會,
也在成果發表會中的演出得到了第一的成績代表學校到校外參加英語歌唱比賽,
雖未得名次,但也藉此機會學到了和隊友間的相互配合 發音訓練等
而我選擇英文系,不外乎是因為高中三年學的主要科目是英文,再者,我認為英文是在職場中很重要的語言,因為國際化的趨勢,擁有進階的語言能力就是一個強勢的優點 (也能夠增加和國外朋友的友好度,甚至和他們學習不同的文化)-> 不好意思 請幫我括號ㄧ下
那我希望教授們能夠給我機會到貴校就讀,貴校的硬體設備和周邊教材完整,我認為在此就讀能夠提升我個人的專業知識,並且在未來學以致用
Update:
這是之後我自己翻的 可以幫我修正嗎
Good afternoon, professors. My name is XX. I have just graduated from XX High School. My personalities are lively and cheerful. I always keep optimistic when I face unhappy things. I like learn things from watching movie. It is my interest.
Update 2:
There are many activities in high school. I was participated English situational conversation competition and English presentation, also got the first in presentation and representative school to take part in English singing contest. Although we didn’t get any place.
Update 3:
But through this chance I know the importance of cooperation with teammate and pronunciation training.
Update 4:
And the reason I choose English is not only because I like it but also it is an important language in workplace. With internationalization, having an advanced language ability
is a big advantage. (It also can increase friendship with foreign friends, even learn different culture.
Update 5:
Then I hope professors can give me a chance to study in your school. Your school have complete faculty and equipment. I think I can enhance my personal professional knowledge in this school. And I’ll apply my knowledge in the future.
Update 6:
或者還有什麼可以補充的把句子聽起來更好 自己念起來感覺很多地方怪怪的
Update 7:
真是太感謝你了~~~ 不好意思可以請你再幫我翻譯以下問題嗎
從你家要怎麼來:
I'm live in Beitou so I'll take MRT.
我們這所科大是不是你第一選擇:
That's right. I think that your school was famous for good faculty and equipment.
I hope I'll be able to study in here, and I'll do my best.
Update 8:
要如何規劃大學生活:
I will stabilize my English knowledge basis first and improve my English listening, speaking, reading and writing also I’ll do my best to obtain certificate on studies.
And in my leisure time I want to join school club and do a part-time job.
Update 9:
在課業上我會先穩定我的基礎並加強英文的聽說讀寫也會努力考取證照
而在閒暇時間也會以不影響課業為優先參加社團活動和打工
平日的休閒活動是什麼:
I like play badminton and volleyball in my leisure time.
我喜歡的休閒活動是打羽球和排球
除了英文 還喜歡什麼科系?
There is no subject I like except English department.
Update 10:
介紹一下你就讀的高中學校的特色是什麼?
I think is the studying environment in my high school, and good equipment.
如果你通過了這次的甄選 你將如何安排這段時間?
I will use this time to improve my computer skill and reading some English magazine like- TIMES.