可以幫我檢查這份自傳是否有需要改善的地方麼?? - 籃球
By Vanessa
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at 2011-01-12T00:00
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麻煩請幫我檢查須要改或是有錯的地方~附上中文原本的文章
時間有點趕~~麻煩大家了!!謝謝
My name is CHIA-HUA Wu , 20 years old this year. Now studying at the National Kaohsiung Marine University, Department of Sea Food Science sophomore. I have a brother and a younger brother. I come from a happy well-off families. Mother and father are businessmen. I grew up very independent. I participated in the study period a lot of activities, especially volleyball. I like to participate in school activities. I not only have made many friends, but also made a number of different valuable experience. My favorite subject is chemistry, because the class our teacher interesting way, another reason is I think very interesting experiment. In addition to chemistry, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I like reading novels and comics, listening to music, watching movies. I also like badminton, volleyball and basketball. As for my personality, I am optimistic, kind, and anything with curiosity. 我叫吳佳樺,今年20歲.現在就讀於國立高雄海洋科技大學的水產食品科學系二年級.我有一個哥哥和一個弟弟.我來自一個幸福的小康家庭.爸爸跟媽媽都是商人.我從小就很獨立. 在學的期間我參加了很多的活動,尤其是排球的比賽.我非常喜歡參加學校的活動。我不但交了很多朋友,而且還取得了許多不同的寶貴經驗。 我最喜歡的科目是化學,因為我們的老師有趣的上課方式,另一個原因是我覺得做實驗很有趣. 除了化學,我也有廣泛的愛好。我喜歡閱讀小說和漫畫,聽音樂,看電影。我也喜歡羽毛球,排球和籃球。 至於我的性格,我很樂觀,親切,對任何事都具有好奇心。
Update:
至於我的性格,我很樂觀,親切,對任何事都具有好奇心。
以上這句如果要改成
至於我的性格,我很樂觀外向,對任何事都具有好奇心,
希望可以給我機會,參予這個活動,累積不同的經驗!
時間有點趕~~麻煩大家了!!謝謝
My name is CHIA-HUA Wu , 20 years old this year. Now studying at the National Kaohsiung Marine University, Department of Sea Food Science sophomore. I have a brother and a younger brother. I come from a happy well-off families. Mother and father are businessmen. I grew up very independent. I participated in the study period a lot of activities, especially volleyball. I like to participate in school activities. I not only have made many friends, but also made a number of different valuable experience. My favorite subject is chemistry, because the class our teacher interesting way, another reason is I think very interesting experiment. In addition to chemistry, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I like reading novels and comics, listening to music, watching movies. I also like badminton, volleyball and basketball. As for my personality, I am optimistic, kind, and anything with curiosity. 我叫吳佳樺,今年20歲.現在就讀於國立高雄海洋科技大學的水產食品科學系二年級.我有一個哥哥和一個弟弟.我來自一個幸福的小康家庭.爸爸跟媽媽都是商人.我從小就很獨立. 在學的期間我參加了很多的活動,尤其是排球的比賽.我非常喜歡參加學校的活動。我不但交了很多朋友,而且還取得了許多不同的寶貴經驗。 我最喜歡的科目是化學,因為我們的老師有趣的上課方式,另一個原因是我覺得做實驗很有趣. 除了化學,我也有廣泛的愛好。我喜歡閱讀小說和漫畫,聽音樂,看電影。我也喜歡羽毛球,排球和籃球。 至於我的性格,我很樂觀,親切,對任何事都具有好奇心。
Update:
至於我的性格,我很樂觀,親切,對任何事都具有好奇心。
以上這句如果要改成
至於我的性格,我很樂觀外向,對任何事都具有好奇心,
希望可以給我機會,參予這個活動,累積不同的經驗!
All Comments
By Kristin
at 2011-01-15T20:17
at 2011-01-15T20:17
問題: 你是不是用電字翻一機阿?
My name is Wu Chia-HuaWu and I’m turning 20 this year. I am currently a sophomore studying at theNational Kaohsiung Marine University, at the Department of Sea Food Science. Ihave two brothers, an older and a younger brother. I come from a prettywell-off family, where my parents are in the business industry. Since I was achild, I have been fairly independent. (或 Igrew up being independent.)
During this semester,I have participated in several activities, of which, I have found volleyball tobe my favorite. Not only do I enjoy making new friends, but I have also gaineda great deal of valuable experiences through (spending time with) them.
My favoritesubject is chemistry, because the professor (或lecturer) has an interesting way of approachto teaching us the material. Another reason is that I have found experiments tobe interesting and enjoyable.
Other thanchemistry, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I enjoy reading novels andcomics, listening to music, and watching movies. I also like badminton,volleyball and basketball. As for my personality, I am optimistic, kind, and inquisitive.
2011-01-14 22:58:23 補充:
If given the chance, I will join this club and make the most out of it.
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