可以幫我檢查這份自傳是否有需要改善的地方麼?? - 籃球

麻煩請幫我檢查須要改或是有錯的地方~附上中文原本的文章
時間有點趕~~麻煩大家了!!謝謝

My name is CHIA-HUA Wu , 20 years old this year. Now studying at the National Kaohsiung Marine University, Department of Sea Food Science sophomore. I have a brother and a younger brother. I come from a happy well-off families. Mother and father are businessmen. I grew up very independent. I participated in the study period a lot of activities, especially volleyball. I like to participate in school activities. I not only have made many friends, but also made a number of different valuable experience. My favorite subject is chemistry, because the class our teacher interesting way, another reason is I think very interesting experiment. In addition to chemistry, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I like reading novels and comics, listening to music, watching movies. I also like badminton, volleyball and basketball. As for my personality, I am optimistic, kind, and anything with curiosity. 我叫吳佳樺,今年20歲.現在就讀於國立高雄海洋科技大學的水產食品科學系二年級.我有一個哥哥和一個弟弟.我來自一個幸福的小康家庭.爸爸跟媽媽都是商人.我從小就很獨立. 在學的期間我參加了很多的活動,尤其是排球的比賽.我非常喜歡參加學校的活動。我不但交了很多朋友，而且還取得了許多不同的寶貴經驗。 我最喜歡的科目是化學，因為我們的老師有趣的上課方式,另一個原因是我覺得做實驗很有趣. 除了化學，我也有廣泛的愛好。我喜歡閱讀小說和漫畫，聽音樂，看電影。我也喜歡羽毛球，排球和籃球。 至於我的性格，我很樂觀，親切，對任何事都具有好奇心。
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至於我的性格，我很樂觀，親切，對任何事都具有好奇心。
以上這句如果要改成
至於我的性格，我很樂觀外向，對任何事都具有好奇心,
希望可以給我機會,參予這個活動,累積不同的經驗!